Evaluation of Final Pieces

Overall, I think that my final pieces were successful in relation to my two artists; Bill Brandt and Robert Frank because the consistent theme of the foundations of architecture was portrayed in the form of contemporary and modern. Also, Robert Frank's image uses the rule of thirds, which sections the photograph into the different perspectives. My first image, in response to Robert Frank is successful in terms of ideas, however, I think the composition of the photograph could have been more effective if the rule of thirds was also applied. This photograph shows modern architecture because it uses colour and it is also traditional using aspects of black and white. This photograph emphasises line as an element of composition, which makes the viewer look through the horizontal and vertical lines, as a grid.

My second photograph, a response to Bill Brandt is successful because it emphasises the construction of the building i.e. where it joins together at a vanishing point. It is also a successful image because it represents architecture's foundations. On the other hand, to improve I could have composed the image better and possible created some shadows to create more depth in the image.
In order to improve my overall final pieces, I think that I could have stuck to the idea more, and also created other variations of themes and ideas.